I am planning on working on this later, but I thought I would post it now. It’s definitely a work in progress, but you can at least see the idea. If you have any recommendations on how to make it better, let me know.
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The people had gathered for some time,
when she passed by on her daily chore,
a water girl, of eight or nine.
of eight or nine, this water girl.
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And seeing Him, just hanging there,
and blood dripping from the wood,
with voices stirring the hillish air,
pregnant with dark dust and soot,
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she starred.
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She starred at Him so long
that she placed her bucket on the ground,
and after a short moment she began,
crying tears without a sound.
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The Man looked down, and saw her face.
and the ache within her eyes.
and a smile — which though bathed in pain,
was pure compassion in disguise.
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He then stared off, where the hills led,
and at the nearby city gate,
and within a minute, he was dead –
and the little girl soon went her way.
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And though some may say I lie,
or that I too strongly do implore,
there never was a smile,
which has ever meant more.